A few things -- the blue text is so hard to read on the back of the red monitor. Be careful of this. The blue, green, and pink jacks on the back of the computer need to be labeled. The monitor "audio" is connected to the wrong jack in the back of the computer. The Internet cable does not acutally go into an electrical outlet. You seem a little unclear as to what can plug into a USB port as the description is very vague. You should use more specific and meaningful examples like flash drives or digital cameras.
I like how you put in the mouse and the power sockets in your diagram. One of the few things I noticed is that the blue font is hard to read when put on a red background. Try something like white.
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A pretty good job, Collin.
A few things -- the blue text is so hard to read on the back of the red monitor. Be careful of this. The blue, green, and pink jacks on the back of the computer need to be labeled. The monitor "audio" is connected to the wrong jack in the back of the computer. The Internet cable does not acutally go into an electrical outlet. You seem a little unclear as to what can plug into a USB port as the description is very vague. You should use more specific and meaningful examples like flash drives or digital cameras.
you did good on the drawing of the computer and definitions but some of the cords go through the definitions
I like how you put in the mouse and the power sockets in your diagram. One of the few things I noticed is that the blue font is hard to read when put on a red background. Try something like white.
The text on the moniter is hard to read but other than that it is a good picture
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